december forecast

11 12 2003

thick rain rushes down
wash the white world back to brown
new snow heads for town

(look, Monte–you don’t have to be japanese to write haiku that rhyme!)

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12 responses

11 12 2003
bluemeg

To You!
Though not Japanese
Yet- words that Rhyme, words that please
Writes Haiku with ease
Fire-Haired Poet
She fills our hearts with music
And our lives with joy
I Started to write more, but they got pretty silly… the word snugglebear doesn’t belong in Haiku…. oh what the hey…
Yes, oh maiden fair
you’re truly my snuggle bear
This line? who could care…
heh.

12 12 2003
cheshirrrecat

Re: To You!
im suing you psychological and emotional trauma for that last one.
;}

12 12 2003
cheshirrrecat

Re: To You!
suing you *for*…..
thats what i get for trying to be witty without having coffee first. ugh.

12 12 2003
bluemeg

Re: To You!
you’re so traumatized you’re losing words???
oh no!! 😉

12 12 2003
cheshirrrecat

Re: To You!
i lose all sorts of words.
nouns, verbs, adjectives….
;}
“we’re all mad here….”

12 12 2003
tyra

Re: To You!
how about gerunds, particles, participles, infinitives, prepositions, conjunctions, interjections…
i could go on and on, except i think i’ve lost the words that name some of the words i’ve lost. 🙂

12 12 2003
cheshirrrecat

Re: To You!
nope–didnt have those to start with. ;}
*kiss*

12 12 2003
bluemeg

Re: To You!
Nouns, Verbs, Adjectives
Parts of Speech, Slipping, Sliding
Run Freely Away

12 12 2003
tyra

Re: To You!
e to the x, dx/dy
e to the x, dy
cosine, secant, tangent, sine
3.14159
square root, cube root, log of pi
kick their axis, tj high!
oh, wait. WRONG kind of geek rhyme. 🙂

15 12 2003
cheshirrrecat

Re: To You!
haha–go meg :}

17 12 2003
l_stboy

Snow falls to the west
Rain on windows pilfers rest
Midnight daydreams less
outside, winter loon,
low and clear december moon,
hint at morning soon
no sound but thought here,
rain on forest, falling tear,
and thoughts of you, dear.
(i think I deserve credit for avoiding a ribald ‘breast’ rhyme in the first one, thank you)

17 12 2003
tyra

lol!
you’re bloody brill, you are. and nice w/the spacing… i read the poems, and i was thinking all these sweet little things at you, and then i scrolled down and can only laugh. you rock. all credit where credit is due. ribald breast is easy, though; can you do it gracefully?
*kiss*

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